On Demand: 9/9/06 Summary of Ede & Lunsford's "Audience Addressed/Audience Invoked" #567crt

[page numbers indicate reading from edited collections rather than original journal article]

Ede and Lunsford characterize “audience addressed” as the assumptions that writers must know—or learn about—the attitudes, beliefs and expectations of their readers.  “Audience invoked,” on the other hand, is a theory based on the idea that the writer invokes an audience by providing cues that tell the reader what role the writer wants the reader to play.  Ede and Lunsford do not identify so much with either side as argue that writers need to have skills to both invoke readers and to anticipate and address readers, depending on the rhetorical situation. Ede and Lunsford expand further: “Those who envision audience as addressed emphasize the concrete reality of the writer’s audience; they also share the assumption that knowledge of this audience’s attitudes, beliefs, and expectations is not only possible (via observation and analysis) but essential” (180). Such individuals encourage “real-world” writing, influenced as they are by audience analysis in speech communication and cognitive psychology research on the composing process. Ede and Lunsford also expand further on the second role of audience: “Those who envision audience as invoked stress that the audience of a written discourse is a construction of the writer…The central task of the writer, then, is not to analyze an audience and adapt discourse to meet its needs.  Rather, the writer uses the semantic and syntactic resources of language to provide cues for the reader—cues which help to define the role or roles the writer wishes the reader to adopt in responding to the text” (184). Ede and Lunsford then address what writing asks of writers, including discursive adaptations to meet the needs and expectations of an addressed audience or responses to the intervention of others (189).  Ultimately, though, the authors state that “the most complete understanding of audience thus involves a synthesis of the perspectives…termed audience addressed, with its focus on the reader, and audience invoked, with its focus on the writer” (191). Because of the complex reality to which the term audience refers and because of its fluid, shifting role in the composing process, any discussion of audience which isolates it from the rest of the rhetorical situation or which radically overemphasizes or underemphasizes its function in relation to other rhetorical constraints is likely to oversimplify. (192)

On Week 2 #345tw

The first face-to-face meeting in a mixed-mode course is almost always uneventful. In my experience, much time's taken up in the form of a Q&A in which the instructor and students figure out together the course parameters, what's (mis)understood about them, and respond accordingly. Despite the clarifications provided in both M1 and M2, I think we're still in the middle of a rocky start.

In particular, I'm concerned about some students' early overemphasis on technology over technical communication. I am to blame for at least part of this, given the technology autobiography assignment and perhaps the focus of Gentle's Conversation and Community. But this is not a course on how to use Twitter. Using technology is part of the course, yes, but these uses are in the service of something else, i.e., technical communication. Blogging and tweeting are required parts of this course because they can help facilitate discussion and further our understanding of technical communication. Posterous and Twitter are not ends, but means. Technologies like these are tools; technical communication is often about those tools. 

Of course, this perceived overemphasis could be an overreaction. I asked a lot of students these first two weeks and they had to manage much of it on their own. With almost all Posterous and Twitter accounts up and running, we should soon move beyond limited discussions of technology and get more into the particulars of technical communication.

We won't be writing papers; we will be producing documents. We may not be making arguments, but we will be relaying information. 

I don't want to conclude with any kind of negativity, though. I also don't want to close with the last word. There are a number of students who are not in possession of this overemphasis on technology and I want to highlight them here.

From M1:

Now I think about goals of technology and how I want myself represented or anything that I am involved in on the web. There is great planning of the overall design to attract visitors to the site. It enables people to get their voice out there as well as any information that would be vital for an audience.
The idea of content that is more valuable because of its usefulness is liberating and exciting. I do believe information should be researched and have credibility, but the idea of users contributing so equally is new and innovative to me. It’s a sort of real-time dialogue, even if it’s actually asynchronous, because it’s still so fresh compared to feedback and response time in the past.
This is the new expectation: that real conversation can be initiated so that the producer may anticipate questions and provide quick and accurate answers. It now makes sense to me why blogging and joining twitter should be required in this course. Nowadays, making connections and receiving constant updates on information or stories is important.
Understanding users’ needs and desires is a must in order to be a successful writer of documentation.
In terms of user-friendly content provided on such platforms, be it a blog or otherwise, the content provider must keep the user’s needs first and foremost in mind and, armed with such an understanding can deliver content successfully. These ideas have caused me to reconsider simple features of my Posterous blog such as the theme, ease of use, number of words used, etc.  I should think more deeply about my blog as a personal contribution to our course’s online community and keep this community in mind when creating posts, tags, and adding any outside content.

 

From M2:

While user interface is now focused upon in modern technical writing, a gap still exists in communicating information about portions of the device with which users don't typically interface (i.e., all the stuff inside) from the developers to the people who need more information than the typical user about those parts of the device (such as someone who is trying to fix it when it is broken).
According to McMurrey, technical writing is usually written about a well known topic, such as a major. When using technical writing it is important to make sure you know who the audience is. In other words, it is very important that the way your writing is worded is easy for the audience to understand.
Basically, I found that she was giving technical names to processes and tools that I use daily—I have watched hours of theatre makeup tutorials on You Tube, uploaded countless pictures to Flickr, learned how to set up a Linksys router via a blog, subscribed to the TED.com RSS feed, etc. I do not know where I learned to do such things—it was certainly not in the classroom or a textbook.
I realize how important it is to the world of science, technology, business, and the field and career I want to go into.  No matter what line of work I go into I’m sure it is going to require a lot of writing and most of it will be technical.  This class will be useful for my future in helping to build a clientele and in establishing a name for myself to show people that I care about what it is that I am doing.
I always thought of technical writers as being those people who write instruction manuals for complicated technology that no one understands.  I now know that even doctors are considered technical writers.

On Week 2 #567crt

In having students first read Berlin's "Contemporary Composition: The Major Pedagogical Theories" and Fulkerson's "Composition at the Turn of the Twenty-First Century," I hoped to begin the many conversations that I imagine will sustain us over the course of the semester. Despite the gap of time between Berlin and Fulkerson (and between Fulkerson and now), we're still addressing many of their concerns. Part of this is because teaching writing is not that simple, just as writing is itself not that simple. How we write and how we teach writing depends on theory, but also practice, institutional context, the students present in first-year writing courses. 

This is what I noticed about many students' comments, just how grounded they were in present or prior experience as students and teachers of writing. I'm both wary and welcoming about this, though. It's important to ground theory in practice, to keep our heads out of the clouds and our feet on the ground, to not get swept up by the potential of a given theory without paying attention to the realities in which we teach. It's also important to not be driven purely past experience and knowledge, to be open to theory as well as amendments to practice. Just because it might seem like a given group of students would be averse to expressivism doesn't necessarily mean they will be. Many of those first-year students who hate/love writing will continue to hate/love, almost regardless of pedagogy. Perhaps we should be more attentive to that nebulous middle.

Then again, I did admit last night to being an idealist. I think I use language less flowery than Berlin, though. But what else did I note about last night's discussion? Let's see...

There is something of value in each theory (even current-traditional!), so don't discard. Instead, reduce, reuse, recycle, remix, repurpose. Don't get too infatuated with a given theory either; be sure to question it. 

Writing of questions: Is it possible to draft a Fulkerson-approved CCS course? Argument or content? Should we worry about the communication of ideas and/or what course aspects are just extraneous information? What should really be at issue in a first-year composition course? Some kind of balance must be executed among teacher and student expectations, that neither pander to the other. And just what is the relationship between New Rhetoric and expressivism/expressionism? Come the semester's end, will we be able to complete Fulkerson's chart? What will we add and/or remove?

 

In the interest of fostering further communication, I offer a sampling of students' most recent entries. Among the interesting points of the individual posts is how much they mirror the existential/identity crisis composition continues to grapple with.

Every theory has potential to alter the way writing, the teaching of writing or the learning of writing is done and can offer a wide varieties of going about it.
Why can't one student dive right into the paper and just write, and why can't another student make an outline, a cluster cloud, or do ten rough drafts? If that is what works for that student, then let them do it. Sometimes I flurish in my writing by just diving right in, and sometimes I sit down and work on an outline. It just depends. It also depends on the topic, the assignment, other environmental factors.
Whether it be a current/traditionalist who flogs you with her red pen for incomplete sentences, a cultural studies methodologist who gives you a demographically related reading text to be inspired by, a feministic expressivist who has to make sure that you feel good about what you have written in your original voice or a hidden criminal defense lawyer posing as a composition instructor who is hell bent on cross-examining your paper, one thing is certain. They will definitely get you to write something and go through some sort of pseudo-process at that.
The idea of New Rhetoric's creating of the “real world” or reality by organization stuck with me (and took up a great deal of my margins!) in that I see that a person uses language (words) to organize thoughts. After that is done, it must be possible to turn that organization into fluid and cohesive ideas.
are we then to pigeon-hole each student into buying a certain model car, or writing style in this case, when others are readily available and may meet the various needs of each individual student? Whichever rhetorical theory teachers choose to implement, I think the first step should be to focus on a solid foundation, which will provide students with the necessary tools to add any accessory they want later
People say "do this, do that, follow these instructions" but rarely is the method behind the method explained. There is more mystery to writing, and more complication, than there should be. Maybe clearing up the mystery and bringing back a focus on clarity, analysis, end results and learning would be a better solution?
How do we standardize process?  Fulkerson emphasizes that it doesn't really work when we break it down into a formulaic series of steps, from pre-writing to final draft, so what do we do?  Process is, at least I hope, supposed to be unique to the author in question. 
I don’t believe that the writing process can be broken down into pieces and filed away as a “box”. Writing is far too expansive and not to mention fascinating to be considered black or white.
One thing that I was really able to take away from Berlin was the idea that writing teachers are really important and have a huge responsibility to their students. He puts it this way, "In teaching writing, we are not simply offering training in a useful technical skill that is meant as a simple complement to  the more important studies of other areas. We are teaching a way of experiencing the world, a way of ordering and making sense of it.

After reading pages and pages of composition and rhetorical theory, I feel like this quote really boils it all down.  Why do we write at all?  Why do we update our FB or Tweet?  Why do we write emails?  Blog?  Even our reposting of video clips, articles, and photos is a way for us to find commonality-- or strike up an argument. 

The real question is this: Why do we want students to write?

Do we want them to become the next major novelist? Do we want them to be able to compose great papers for their professors? Last time I checked, they don't let you write term papers as a career. So maybe we need to teach kids how to write so they can simply express themselves.

it is essential as educators to encourage students to question everything.  It is important to engage students to form their own questions which will in turn guide them to their own answers.  As a result, students begin to form their own identity as writers and individuals. 

Clarification on facilitations and/or a crazy idea #567crt

In discussing approaches to next week's facilitation with Michelle E., I see how I wasn't clear on my expectations. Rather than just having 1-2 students lead a group discussion about the week's readings, I'd like for the facilitation to be more of a pedagogical exercise. We're delving into so much theory, but some/most doesn't offer actual classroom practices to implement, right? The facilitation presents an opportunity to do just that. In this way, I'm seeing the facilitation as more of a mock classroom session. The facilitator is the first-year writing instructor and the rest of us are first-year writing students. Does this make sense? Is this achievable? 

Now, here's the crazy idea: Let's connect these facilitations, almost turning them into a semester-long game of Telephone. Facilitations begin with process, a natural starting point, so perhaps that session can be geared more toward prewriting than the other stages. Whatever writing we generate during that facilitation can be carried over and applied to expressivism, rhetorical theory, collaboration, etc. By Week 12, we'll each have a piece of writing influenced by each pedagogical theory and its practice. Does this make sense? Is this achievable?

On demand: 9/15/06 Brief Summary of Fulkerson's "Composition at the Turn of the Twenty-First Century" #567crt

Despite being at its root an argumentative piece on the complicated nature of composition (less unified, more splintered, ready for the new theory wars), Fulkerson’s piece is also succinct in documenting the various and sundry approaches to the teaching of writing.  (Un)fortunately, each of the approaches is problematic; while CCS risks indoctrination and may leave little room for any actual teaching of writing, expressivism suffers from a lack of definition due to its all-encompassing nature and procedural rhetoric is something of an unstable trinity (argumentation, genre and academic discourse).  Fulkerson makes this presentation within the context of axiology, process, pedagogy and epistemology, emphasizing the importance and influence of each upon the creation of a composition course.  By positioning his argument in such a way, Fulkerson inherently encourages teachers of writing to consider more deeply their own positions and approaches.

 

#345tw blogging/facilitation groups for M1 and M2 (*still* incomplete)

You do not have to read, subscribe to, or comment on every blog, only those belonging to your fellow group members. You do, however, need to follow everyone on Twitter.

For M1: http://twitter.com/betajames/eng345m1/members
For M2: http://twitter.com/betajames/eng345m2/members

 

ENG345M1

Week 4

Jessica M. - http://electricfiction0.posterous.com/

Dorice M. - http://dorice.posterous.com

Kim T. - http://tprep08.posterous.com/

Jon G. - http://jogoings.posterous.com

Marianna M. - http://marianma.posterous.com/

 

Week 6

Sarah H. - http://shemingway.posterous.com/

Dan - http://danielpo1213.posterous.com

Jamie M. - http://jamiemac15.posterous.com

Brianca N. - http://briancan.posterous.com

Erika W. - http://erikaw926.posterous.com/

Winston F. - http://socialite090.posterous.com/

 

Week 8

Crystal S. - http://pisces2012.posterous.com

Mahgan T. - http://mahgan.posterous.com

Isaac H. - http://ishopkin.posterous.com

Nick P. - http://sooperphli.posterous.com

Sarah L. - http://dream123.posterous.com

Aleah A. - http://aalrifaiey.posterous.com

 

Week 10

Matt B. - http://mrmattyb14.posterous.com

Katie N. - http://nelly9er.posterous.com

Cameron W. - http://cawaites.posterous.com

Katherine S. - http://katriley.posterous.com

Matt C. - http://mattc5454.posterous.com

Zaid B. - http://pakistallion01.posterous.com

 

ENG345M2

Week 4

Matt C. - http://mjc10001110101.posterous.com

Amanda M. - http://amerrell.posterous.com

Maddie T. - http://mstirban.posterous.com

Ben E. - http://sadar.posterous.com

 

Week 6

Akua O. - http://akuao2011.posterous.com

Katie M. - http://kmatuzak.posterous.com

Nick B. - http://nbrisbin.posterous.com

Eric P. - http://epatty.posterous.com

Kate K. - http://kmkloor.posterous.com

 

Week 8

Chad C. - http://crossfire1444.posterous.com

Nathan R. - http://robsongtp.posterous.com

Deon H. - http://b778deonh.posterous.com

Sarah Z. - http://szoromsk.posterous.com

Nkemdilim N. - http://nnwodo.posterous.com

Elvira J. - http://elviej13th.posterous.com

 

Week 10

Brooke P. - http://brookepurdy.posterous.com

Alison - http://alkimber.posterous.com

Alicia S. - http://alicialee1007.posterous.com

Jade C. - http://Jadec.posterous.com

Tiara J. - http://tiaraj.posterous.com

Chloe K.M. - http://thechampishere.posterous.com

#567crt blogroll and Twitter group (both *still* incomplete)

You do not have to read/subscribe to every blog.

Ashley A.
http://megadethash.posterous.com/

Scott A.
http://scottmatkinson.posterous.com/

Megan B.
http://megatronzilla.posterous.com

Kim C.
http://fairiemomma.posterous.com/

Amanda D.
http://ledalady.posterous.com/

Joshua D.
http://snoopdugas.posterous.com/

Michelle E. 
http://writeright.posterous.com/ 

Adam F.
http://adamferenz.posterous.com/

Gia H.
http://giahuff.posterous.com

John M.
http://3826kentstreet.posterous.com/

Tara M.
http://taramoreno.posterous.com/

Stacie M.
http://stalee01.posterous.com/

Jensie S.
http://incongruousfeminisms.posterous.com/

Kevin V. N.
http://kevinvannatter.posterous.com/

Rebecca W.
http://rwooleve.posterous.com/

 

You do need to follow everyone on Twitter: http://twitter.com/betajames/eng567crt/members

semester-end project #567crt

(various deadlines; check schedule)

  • Option #1: Develop an undergraduate writing course syllabus, including rationale.
    The syllabus should be at least 10 pages. 

    Some of you may have current/past syllabi that you are using. It is not acceptable to submit this as your work for the semester. First, if you work from syllabi given to you, then you want to practice developing your own course. Second, having a range of pedagogical options will benefit you in adjusting to different contexts for teaching.

    Course parameters: First-Year Composition, Tuesday/Thursday for 75-minute classes, 16-week semester in which week 9 is Spring Break and week 16 is exams

    The syllabus should explain what you (and the students) will be doing each day of the semester. For each day, provide a short description and rationale of the day's work.

    Make sure to explain when things are due.

    Make sure it is clear what students will be doing during class, such as lectures, discussions, activities, workshops, or presentations.

    List important materials (assignment sheets, quizzes, various media). You do not have to develop materials for each day (though you could amend and include your facilitation); provide a brief overview of what these materials are and what they entail.

    The rationale should be at least 1000 words and cite appropriate scholarly sources that go beyond assigned course readings. In essence, make an argument about how your approach to teaching this material is pedagogically sound.

    Explain the context of the course. Explain the goals for the course. Assigned readings and writings are the backbone of the course; place them at the center of your discussion. Highlight activities and other work that students will do to support the course goals. Pay close attention to those practices that get repeated and/or are a cornerstone of your pedagogy.

    Support your argument about the pedagogical soundness of your curriculum. With this document, your essential argument is that an instructor using this pedagogy will be able to achieve certain outcomes. Use your syllabus as evidence to support that argument. 

    In deciding what should be explained in the daily rationale in the syllabus and in the overall rationale, focus on limited and repeated practices. If occurring just once, include the practice in the daily rationale. If repeated multiple times and/or functions as a cornerstone of the semester pedagogy, articulate this in the overall rationale.

In both the syllabus and its accompanying rationale, I will be looking for evidence of the following:

  1. a sense of audience. Will any composition instructor be able to understand this syllabus based on what's provided? Will an administrator understand this syllabus?
  2. a syllabus grounded in composition and rhetorical theory
  3. a logical progression of activities and assignments that build upon each other
  4. an understanding of the students the syllabus was designed for
  5. a clear sense of what you and the students will be doing on a daily basis
  6. activities and assignments that are executable and correspond with course goals
  7. a teacherly persona
  8. appropriate use of conventions, i.e., readable formt and correct MLA or APA citations (if applicable)

 

  • Option #2

The editorial staff of College Composition and Communication (CCC) invites submission of research and scholarship in composition studies that supports college teachers in reflecting on and improving their practices in teaching writing. The field of composition studies draws on research and theories from a broad range of humanistic disciplines— English studies, linguistics, literacy studies, rhetoric, cultural studies, gay studies, gender studies, critical theory, education, technology studies, race studies, communication, philosophy of language, anthropology, sociology, and others—and within composition studies, a number of subfields have also developed, such as technical communication, computers and composition, writing across the curriculum, research practices, history of composition, assessment, and writing center work.

Articles for CCC may come out of the discussions within and among any of these fields, as long as the argument presented is clearly relevant to the work of college writing teachers and responsive to recent scholarship in composition studies. The usefulness of articles to writing teachers should be apparent in the discussion, but articles need not contain explicit sections detailing applications to teaching practices.

In writing for CCC, you should consider a diverse readership for your article, a readership that includes at least all teachers of college-level writing at diverse institutions and literacy centers, and may include administrators, undergraduate and graduate students, legislators, corporate employers, parents, and alumni. To address such an audience, you need not avoid difficult theories or complex discussions of research and issues or detailed discussions of pedagogy; rather you should consider the interests and perspectives of the variety of readers who are affected by your theories, pedagogies, and policies.

Genre, Format, Length, Documentation. You are encouraged to submit articles in whatever genre and format best fits your purposes, and to use alternate genres and formats if they best express your meanings; similarly, the use of endnotes and subheadings should align with your purposes and meanings. Most articles in CCC run between 4,000 and 7,000 words (or approximately 16–28 double-spaced pages), though articles may be shorter or longer in line with your purposes. All articles should be documented according to the MLA Style Manual and Guide to Scholarly Publishing (2nd ed.). NCTE's Guidelines for Gender-Fair Use of Language can be found here: http://www.ncte.org/positions/statements/genderfairuseoflang.

student expectations of #567crt

Just a reminder of what we're doing, why we're here, etc.:

This is required.

This is our area of interest.

We plan to be teaching down the road (or again).

We want to sound smart, to improve our writing, to improve our students' writing at the high school and/or college level.

We desire to broaden our view of composition and/or rhetoric, to learn more new things and/or digital rhetoric in particular.

We are curious about why we write the way we do.

We are here out of ignorance, because we "don't wanna not know."